Sam Adams pint glasses

SAM ADAMS 6 PINT GLASSES WHITE ALE NEW


ended - Saturday, May 3, 2008

Auction grade: C+

Starting bid: $15.99

Final selling price: $0 - no bids


Up for sale in this eBay auction is a set of six Samuel Adams White Ale pint glasses. The seller claims that they are brand new.

The title for this auction is pretty good. Apart from not using all capital letters, I would also find a way to sneak the word "beer" into the title. If need be, "glasses" can be shortened to "glass." The eBay search engine considers the two words to be the same. If the seller were to change it to "pint glass", he should also put an "x" in front of the "6" and make it "x6".

There's a toss-up on how to handle the auction's description for this particular auction. The problem is that the target audience for these glasses is a wide range of adults ranging from those still in college to those in retirement who want to build or add to their collection of beer memorabilia. If the seller wanted to specifically market the glasses to the partying college crowd, then the large font and color in the description is appropriate. However, if the seller wants this auction to be for everyone or mainly for those older than thirty, then this description needs a serious makeover with the font and actual text.

For the sake of argument, let's assume that it's better to market this to everyone instead of just the college crowd. Naturally, the wider target audience leads to a better chance of making the sale at the end of the auction. In that case the seller needs to cut the font size in half. The color is fine as it's easy to read and gives this beer-related auction a fun atmosphere.

"Get one of these awesome Samuel Adams White Ale Pint Glasses for your house, dorm or party or collection!"

The first problem in this sentence is that the seller is encouraging the buyer to get one of these fancy glasses. The problem is that even in the title this is being marketed as a set of six glasses. The seller needs to rephrase that line of text to reflect the actual set of glasses instead of just one of them.

The other problem in this sentence deals with the sellers usage of commas to separate different ideas for the glasses. It might read better if it was written "house, dorm, party, or even your beer or pint glass collection."

"Set of 6 Brand New Never Used Logo 16 OZ Beer Pint Glass."

Here the seller is resorting to capitalizing the first letter of each word for effect. Perhaps a better idea would be to capitalize all of the letters in the most important word or phrase, and then using bold or italic for the other important words. This will look a lot better and keep the advertisement looking more professional than the format that the seller used. Also, since the seller is talking about the set of six (not "6") glasses, the word "glass" at the end of the sentence should instead be "glasses."

"Product Type : towels"

That needs to be changed!

The picture of the pint glass looks pretty good. We can clearly see the logo and the fact that the glass looks nice and clean. It would have been nice if the seller provided a group shot of all six glasses together. For many of these auctions involving lots or collections, people like to see all of the items included in the picture(s). For an auction with starting bid and shipping costs that high, the price of adding a second picture into this auction is minuscule.

Overall, this isn't that bad of an auction if we assume that the seller is mainly targeting these pint glasses for the younger crowd. If the seller expects this auction to be for everyone, then some changes are going to be needed in the auction's description to make it look much more professional. The high shipping cost makes me want to believe that the seller is going to be extra careful with wrapping and shipping the glasses.